This site has changed a bit since I last came on here... I clicked on submit art & I can't see what I'm fucking typing so I put this in my journaal instead; Pissed off now. Any advice
? Clicked on literature & can't see what genre/category I'm putting this in!
I should really be revising for my exams in January but I ended up writing a poem instead.
I hate poetry. (Bit ironic as I took lit -.- )
But I found a bit of inspiration from observations around me -
I lie. I do like poetry. Just not the arty farty rhyming shit.
This is the type of poetry I like ... So here it is. My first official poem/ballad whatever you wannaa call it;
(Any suggestions for a name would be welcome)
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I see faded hills through the window
Highlighted by chalky light
Smudged into rounded peaks
By unseen fingertips
Clouds that drift past...
Ride on whispering winds
The sun takes a peek
Over rushing white tides
A mock sunrise in the afternoon
Golden rays illuminate the room
Distorted, soft grey shadows on the wall
Life continues beneath a pastel-blue sky
Trees hush in the breeze
Tiny swaying silhouettes on the horizon line
Pale molecules and atoms
floating
Dis-joining from their larger, cotton bodies
A watchful pupil piercing the grey
Glows over this forgotten town
~ Yeah. Didn't say it was gunn be any gooodd & I had no idea how to end it. Destructive criticism allowedd :3
Sta.sh
Sentimental 
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
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Everyone wants to be happy, nobody wants to be in pain. But you can't have a rainbow, without any rain...
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
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*// ... Every time an eagle feather drops from heaven another warrior falls ... \\*
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
thank u! I rly love ur work too!
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*// ... Every time an eagle feather drops from heaven another warrior falls ... \\*
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
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Even heroes have the right to dream . . ;
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
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Thank you~
check out twilight soundtrack"dreamcatcher"
yo ll love it..
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TO THE WORLD
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Author of the moment,
Can you tell me?
Do I end up,
Do I end up happy?
~ he is we, happily ever after
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*// ... Every time an eagle feather drops from heaven another warrior falls ... \\*
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
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Mia: "HOLY EPIC THIGHS BATMAN!"
Abby: Well it is original... -gets cut off-
Mia: "HE JUST MOO(ED) ABBY! ROCK JUST MOO(ED)!"
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*// ... Every time an eagle feather drops from heaven another warrior falls ... \\*
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
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Love Is Love No Matter Who You Find It In.
♂ + ♂ = ♥
♀ + ♀ = ♥
♀ + ♂ = ♥
put this on your signature if you agree
is taking requests
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
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I love 'em books...
But do they love me back?
I think they might...
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Aree youu bored?
Takke my Art challenge in my journal! -> [link]
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Tomorrow is my turn... I look forward to going
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